Gdes3003 - Sample Packaging From Peer Assessment [Not 100% finished]

Adam Hinchcliffe

Andy - A great improvement on the previous week Adam.. The box needs to be as simple as possible really - I'd question the need to have any colour on the actual box if it was to have some kind of wrapping.. The wrapping must be simple and effective though - I like the idea that 's coming along here but think my initial point would be that there's too much wrapping. It really needs to be a quickly assembled sleeve if anything. Then there's the big issue that your client wants the potential customers to be able to clearly see the goods [bottle/s].. On route as such Adam with a few things still to resolve - some nice ideas though - I'm liking the straw :-)

Anna Jarvis

Andy - I think that you've progressed ideas beyond this now Anna but the basics are appropriate. I think the consid from Ian was ther there was simply 'too much cardboard'. Having said that, you can see the product, it's relatively easy to assemble and it's pretty bombproof. Some padding in between the bottles is called for though [I know that you had a divider - but is this the best or could another fold from the box form the divider  like Hannah's idea?]. Also transferring of graphics to the brown cardboard box. See hoe Tim's emulated the tone of the cardboard in his printed designs stuck on top of his box..

Anna Pirvola

Andy - Anna, I think this is a brave move by you and it shows great promise - even though I think you were losing a bit of faith last time I saw you about it. I think it needs to be just that little bit more rigid and another tab or two at the side is the answer I think. But.. It displays the product well, is simple-looking. there's a decent printable area for possible board /traditional games etc and it's a radical departure from some of the other ideas that have possibly played a little safer in style - which is to be congratulated..

Hannah Potter

Andy - these are on route Hannah, it's good to see the whole things the final size now though - you get a better perspective.. Simple colour scheme, practical sizing and it displays the product well when on the shelf as well as transports it safely. It's not fully resolved yet I know but I like the reds and how they work with the generic brown of the cardboard, I also like the way that you've thought about the glasses associated - they work well..

James Duffield

Andy - Innovative design here James - really like that you've thought long and hard about how this pretty unique shape fits together using glue-free locking tabs etc. Clear that it resembles the Weston's logo  - I guess it's how the bottles fit, how to pad these out for safety in travel, what your second use or 'value added' ideas are [games maybe etc?].

Luke Smith

Michael Evans

Mike Doe

Nick Lyons

Peter Fox

Timothy John Berry

Will Darling